Wednesday, September 11, 2013

Blog #2: More Criticisms on "Mary Barton"

            The two criticisms that I chose to look at for this blog are Rosemarie Bodenheimer’s “Private Grief and Public Acts in Mary Barton” and Patsy Stoneman’s “The Feminization of Working-Class Men in Mary Barton”.  Bodenheimer makes the claim that “Mary Barton is a novel about responding to the grief of loss or disappointment.  Its pages are filled with domestic disaster; the sheer accumulation of one misfortune after another is the organizing principle of the first half of the narrative.”(510) Her essay criticizes Gaskell’s “technical discontinuities” and ”apparently artless repetition”.  While Bodenheimer chooses to look at Gaskell’s writing inconsistencies and faults, Stoneman chooses to leave the criticism of the author herself to the side and look more at past criticisms themselves.  Stoneman argues that critics too often “deplore the presence of ‘extraneous factors’ such as the love story and the murder plot”(543) Stoneman urges critics to “approach the novel through the ethics of the family, therefore, we do not detract from its value as an exploration of class-relations, but instead of seeing it as an ‘industrial novel’ flawed by political naivety and superfluous sub-plots, we can see it as an attempt to understand the interaction of class and gender.”(544)

            I personally did not notice in Mary Barton what Bodenheimer refers to as “the transitions from dramatized scene to narrative summary [that] are awkward and abrupt”(512) I thought that the novel was one that could be read with ease.  I do, however, agree that the novel depicts one personal tragedy after another, and I’d venture to say that most readers generally do too.  In regards to Stoneman’s essay, I really enjoyed the different approach to Mary Barton.  The criticisms relating to Gaskell’s inconsistencies in her writing seem redundant at this point, and the approach of looking at the paternal behavior of the characters to understand the class war was rather refreshing.  Looking at this behavior shines light on the basis of some of the characters’ seemingly rash decisions.  For instance, John Barton is so passionate about punishing the mill owners not only because he is angry that he is losing pay, but one of his greatest fears is that Mary will have to work in the factory, which he will absolutely not have.  Using this approach, we can come to understand that some of the decisions (such as the millworkers conspiring to kill the mill owners) were made in an effort to protect one another. 

2 comments:

  1. I agree with Bodenheimer's claim that the novel jumps around so much in genre and intent that it makes the literature challenging to stay on task with. Usually with authors of this age, I feel like they tend to stick with the same tone and mode throughout the novel. Gaskell breaks away with that and whether it is a good thing or bad thing is wholly up to the reader.

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  2. We'll have to talk about Mary Barton vs. Middlemarch in class. In many ways, Mary Barton reads like a first novel and/or the novel of an inexperienced writer, whereas Middlemarch pretty much shows us Eliot with all of her writing powers on display. For me, Middlemarch argues just as strongly as Mary Barton, but Eliot develops and sustains her arguments in a much different manner--lots more layers and interconnecting threads that challenge the reader.

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